2012年2月3日星期五

Ask Gideon: The Blue Giant, Care to comment?

Glistening in the sunlight

Dancing on the waves of air

Giant, Blue, Butterfly



Flower to Flower

Melodies alone she hears

Silent, wings, flutter



Exposed by sunlight

Enticing, welcoming shroud

Dress maker prepares



Slayer awaits diner

Gentle breeze sirens song

Others pass her by



Today she escapes

Flowers fragrances beckons

Giant, Blue, Butterfly

Ask Gideon: The Blue Giant, Care to comment?
i liked it, i thought the ending sentence's were very creative. You have a very unique style that i do enjoy. Keep sharing...
Reply:Yes, I think your poem is lovely. It is a seasonal

occurrence, for that is the only time you will a see a butterfly that magnitude, Giant blue.
Reply:Colorful imagery. One more day to avoid the siren's song.
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as usual your words are beautiful
Reply:A giant among insects...
Reply:Nice imagery and use of nature terms.
Reply:A butterflies dance, it seems to me. Nicey put together
Reply:Very soothing. Reading this feels like having sips of chamomile tea. =)

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