Glistening in the sunlight
Dancing on the waves of air
Giant, Blue, Butterfly
Flower to Flower
Melodies alone she hears
Silent, wings, flutter
Exposed by sunlight
Enticing, welcoming shroud
Dress maker prepares
Slayer awaits diner
Gentle breeze sirens song
Others pass her by
Today she escapes
Flowers fragrances beckons
Giant, Blue, Butterfly
Ask Gideon: The Blue Giant, Care to comment?
i liked it, i thought the ending sentence's were very creative. You have a very unique style that i do enjoy. Keep sharing...
Reply:Yes, I think your poem is lovely. It is a seasonal
occurrence, for that is the only time you will a see a butterfly that magnitude, Giant blue.
Reply:Colorful imagery. One more day to avoid the siren's song.
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as usual your words are beautiful
Reply:A giant among insects...
Reply:Nice imagery and use of nature terms.
Reply:A butterflies dance, it seems to me. Nicey put together
Reply:Very soothing. Reading this feels like having sips of chamomile tea. =)
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